 CommentsDevious Comments aaah...gak usah ngrasa bersalah kuk buat ngritik2^^
siapa juga boleh asal kritikannya bener...lagian orang laen kan selalu bisa ngliat kesalahan apa yang kita gak liat...tul gak? gw jawab yah... yang soal warna kulit...warna kulitnya Death mank beda ma Cain...cuma emank beda yah lightingnya?gw gak nyadar tuh...maksudnya gmana seh? warna kulitnya dia kurang matching jadinya yah ma overall color scheme kah? soal tanduk...hahah...gw emank miss yang disini  ntar gw coba edit lagih  soal detil...emank armornya dia detil seh...kalo yang laen keaknya gak detil dhe...si cain kan bajunya jauh lebi simpel ketimbang Death... soal warna yang terlalu dark...nie kompie warnet sini yang gw pas nulis ini gelap,tapi di kompie warnet laen terang,hampir sama keak yang di laptop gw...dan dilaptop gw...itu smua obyek kliatan smua^^ jadi yaaah...kalo soal ini mungkin akrena beda settingan kompie aja kali yah mkacieh buat kritikannya yah  !-- Judge it, King tsumugarete kita unmei no Saga sono ude ni yudanerareta kiba o muita mono wa eien ni naraku o samayou What is real? attouteki na shihai o ima oozora ni shikakete kuru yuruginai sonzai Roots of the king…  haha ya..soalnya gw blm yakin dgn sense mata gw si, berhubung gak terpelajar scara formil soal ilmu gambar menggambar XD jadi kl ada yg kliatan aneh2 plg dari feeling aja.
warna kulit..itu hampir sama intinya kali ya ama RC punya kritik, trnyata stela dpratiin lg itu gara2 lightsource nya yg aga kurang konsis d kekny.. makanya kesannya kek, cth: 2 foto, 1 d tmpt trang 1 rada gelap, trus disatuin, jadinya rda krg match. si death itu kek dtmpt terang, kulitnya cerah gt kan, kl cain dah pas ama color scheme nya. lol kl warna kulit dasar pastinya beda haha aneh kl sama kecuali anak kembar. detil, maksud gw focus keseluruhanny, perhatian otomatis tertuju k tempat yg detail, agak mendistraksi gitu maksud gw. pdhl maunya difokuskan k skenarionya kan? contoh extrimnya: 1 gambar objectnya 1 chara digambar simple tapi BG nya detail mampus & sharp, akirnya chara nya jadi gak kliatan penting kan? biasanya gw kl bagian yg mo dibikin aksen bagian lainnya dikasi gelap2 ato rada blur *sbnrny gara2 suka malas bkin detail juga lol* soal darkny, gw jg blakangan ini problemnya gt ama perbandingan LCD n CRT, akirnya tiap kali gw mo posting art gw slalu liad dulu d crt n adjusting dikit d, soalnya jadi gelap, mayan beda jau si. wadoh bahasa inggris maksa malah jadi gak ngartos wkwkw sama2..ini skalian cobain  -- art commission? [link]  visit my HQ, PreyHeaven "i need to seek for Astral World before 2012!" |
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the skin tone, between Cain and Death especially their faces, seem a bit unmatched, i see them like they're not in the same lighting. (
cain's horn, it seems a bit flat to me, if u reduced the shading on the center part it'll be better
overall canvas's focus; i think it's a bit scattered as almost all object is detailed especially death's armor. and..last thing.. i see most of their clothes are too dark so i hardly can see where's cain's arm. why? it's not ur fault, coz i think my monitor turned old and darken
oh i feel guilty to critic this piece*who're ya to critic yer elder?!* *runs* haha, as always, the detail is stunning, i like their pose, expression, and the atmosphere, i dont need to praise u much here since we already know ur art quality ^^v
keep ur spirit high and keep improving